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Old April 28th, 2018, 01:08 PM
Asher Kelman Asher Kelman is offline
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Default No border but empty white space in one area.

Here, inm a sgot from an outdoor art show in sunny, high noon, Venice Californa, I have no border, and look at the problem in the sun-bleached upper right hand corner.






Asher Kelman: Mother and Daughter

5D 50 1.2L f1.6 1/200 sec ISO 1600
Avaiiable dim light, No noise reduction



This is not presented optimally as the bleached upper right corner lets the image down and prts of the composition gets lost in the surounding white space of a gallery wall.

It would have been betteer to have burnt that area in, added sky or else use a very light grey matt and a thin frame. This needs attention as otherwise the emotion of the image is let down by its delivery to the public.

Asher
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