#1 is my favourite.....
Hi Guys....
Ron, you made some very valid points here, and I agree with you whole heartedly. I was actually hesitant about putting #2 on display here because I really didn't like the nose being so OoF, and as you pointed out the skin texture in the cheeks fights for attention with her eyes. I will next time take your advice and shoot from slightly further back and hopefully try to acheive a slightly softer skin texture.
Jan, #1 is my favourite, because of the slight mischievious look in her eyes and face as you pointed out. I prefer portraits as well without their teeth on display.
Cem, yes you are right about the focusing in her eyes. When I took the shots, I did focus on her eyes, but either I or she may have moved slightly when I recomposed the shot. I suppose a slightly wider DoF would be more appropriate in this instance, or possibly manual focus ??
Asher, I always try to acheive sharp eyes in every portrait that I do (not that I do many at all). I have only recently purchased this lens, and in fact these are my first portraits with it. I severely underestimated the narrowness of the DoF, (it is my first 1.2 lens) and need take this into consideration the next time I use it. I took the photos fairly loosely and cropped them tight in the final production......
Thanks all for your constructive criticisms.
Regards,
Barry.