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Old October 22nd, 2016, 10:22 AM
Wolfgang Plattner Wolfgang Plattner is offline
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... lines/forms in color





and in monochrome

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Old October 22nd, 2016, 10:50 AM
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Hi, Wolfgang,

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... lines/forms in color





and in monochrome

Very nice.

I think here the color is good - vital, even.

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Old November 19th, 2016, 12:54 PM
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An interesting shot. Looks like there is a school bus behind the window?
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Old November 23rd, 2016, 10:40 AM
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"... lines/forms in color"





"and in monochrome"


Wolfgang,

The the one in color is interesting but the monochrome seems more intriguing. Can you increase the gray contribution from the yellow "bus" to make its area in the composition more prominent.

However, if this is a finished work, of course ignore my request as you must not alter it then at my wish and whim!

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Old November 23rd, 2016, 03:32 PM
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Very spare. I think best with out color. Like the second version.
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