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Old July 12th, 2011, 11:54 AM
Otto Haring Otto Haring is offline
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I know it is only one photo. I will upload more photos soon. I am still editing them. What do you think?

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Old July 12th, 2011, 04:47 PM
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Hi Otto,

A regal introduction to Indian wedding with style. We see in the background the joy of those who dress her and welcome he bridal status. The bride us superbly shown in great detail, blossomed to the full with joy.

For my taste I'd at least wonder about removing the blue lamp and moving in the figures closer to her but making the composition asymmetrical.

Thanks for sharing,

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Old July 13th, 2011, 08:11 AM
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Hi Otto,

A regal introduction to Indian wedding with style. We see in the background the joy of those who dress her and welcome he bridal status. The bride us superbly shown in great detail, blossomed to the full with joy.

For my taste I'd at least wonder about removing the blue lamp and moving in the figures closer to her but making the composition asymmetrical.

Thanks for sharing,

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Thanks a lot!!! I will remove the lamp! :)
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Old July 13th, 2011, 09:41 AM
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Otto,

In CS5, there's a content aware function. The advantage is that you can remove the lamp and narrow the picture id you want but protecting the figures on either side in the process. It would be an instructive exercise to see how successfully it works on this picture and gives you freedom to recompose, after the fact as you can alter the distances on either side of the bride at you whim.

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Old August 20th, 2011, 05:51 PM
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In CS5, there's a content aware function. The advantage is that you can remove the lamp and narrow the picture id you want but protecting the figures on either side in the process. It would be an instructive exercise to see how successfully it works on this picture and gives you freedom to recompose, after the fact as you can alter the distances on either side of the bride at you whim.

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Thanks for the suggestion!
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Old September 5th, 2011, 03:42 AM
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Also try clearing up the front right side of bride. I think it should not be there.
Thanks for sharing your picture.
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