Hi Nikolai,
This picture moves away from easy sensuality and approaches the female figure as a beautiful form. Has it arrived? Maybe, maybe not, but certainly this is far from where you started. I'd have liked perfect symmetry or clear departure that is purposeful. This turn of the head is neither one not the other. The girl's figure is beautiful and the picture deserves for you to do more to improve this line of experiment. I hope you have more of her with the same attempt to celebrate form.
Thanks for sharing!
Asher