This is an excellent picture. That, Nathaniel we start with.
I do question the blue sky. Of course it is blue since that is the color of sky, but is it really contributing to the picture?
Let me argue that it might not. Yes that's pretty outragious. After all the scene is beautiful and the blue sky is so remarkable.
Now look at the remainder of the photograph. There is no other blue. Moreover, the remaining picture is defined by shape and shading in black and white. In the sky, the clouds too are interesting because of the shading.
So a simple test, just convert to B&W and look at your picture. One can use the simplest conversion and see that the picture holds together better a B&W, at least to my eye.
Anyway, it's enjoyable to have this view of Alpine beauty! I hope others will follow!
Asher