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Challenge Optimize This "Untitled 2006_07"

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
I took this picture one late bustling hot California evening.

She's, as you see, on the side walk on Hollywood Blvd. Ca. She has straw things to sell. There's no title to set you on any track!

2006_07_Girl_3235.jpg


Uncorrected


Download the DNG image, process and crop as you wish according to the title you provide.

Good luck.

Asher

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Brian Lowe

New member
I have two versions of this photo.

The first photo was processed with Lightroom & converted to grayscale. Then I adjusted the grayscale sliders to my liking. Last I cropped the photo to draw your eyes to her face. Then your eyes can wonder to let you think what is she doing.


Enjoy,
Brian


Titled: A Girl on Hollywood Boulevard selling her goods

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This Photo I did in color, I adjusted the color in Lightroom then imported the photo into Lightzone and applied the gaussian blur.

The focus is on her face and eyes do you see happiness or saddened?

This one is titled: Why am I here?

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Brian Lowe

New member
Dierk Haasis said:
Asher, what did you do to the DNG, I am close to unable to come up with anything remotely being a correct WB?

Dierk,

The lighting on Hollywood boulevard at night makes shooting very difficult and challenging. You have white & orange streetlights overhead plus all the other lights from the building around there. I think this is part on the Challenge.........

FWIW, this is my WB adjustment with the DNG file in Lightroom,

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Dierk Haasis

pro member
Well, to come up with my rendition I had to use

- Lightroom for WB, slight underexposure and crop
- Nikon Capture NX for everything else

Madonna.jpg


Subtle changes to achieve an obvious interpretation, slight brightening of the face, darkening of everything else except the silver spokes, which have been greatly brightened.
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Dierk Haasis said:
Asher, what did you do to the DNG, I am close to unable to come up with anything remotely being a correct WB?

Nothing AFAIK! I will carefully check it. The challenge of the area is as Brian pointed out. Unless one uses flash, the color comes from the sky, the sinking sun and various neon lights.

In fact, if the light was during the day, then white balance at her face with a gray card would remove the added hues given by the location. Ubfortunately, the camera cannot capture precisely this edgy mixture. The only approach would be to use a grey scale card before the sun went down and then use that later to partially nuance the lighting a lttle. That change would have to be added carefully. Alternately one is left in the position of the lighting on the "runway" when girls step forward, one after the other to a base beat and changing lights. There, the solution is flash, allowing the b.g. to keep the ambience.

Asher
 

Dierk Haasis

pro member
Asher Kelman said:
In fact, if the light was during the day, then white balance at her face with a gray card would remove the added hues given by the location.

My original problem was not some stray hues but an ugly cast to the complete photo, which I could not cure in Lightzone - my first choice for what I did because I would have it easier with the face and the spokes. I took it into RSP and again had trouble to WB the thing, I either got an orange or a green picture with lots of blown highlights. Essentially the same with ACR in Photoshop CS2; Lightroom took care of it with one click onto either the street or her shirt.
 

Ray West

New member
I suppose its stating the obvious, but the wheel looks like a halo, as in church window stained glass, so maybe push it towards posterisation, turn it into a graphic rendition, a more extreme version of Dierk's.

Best wishes,

Ray
 

Cem_Usakligil

Well-known member
Madonna of the Hollywood Bld.

Here is my rendition. I was busy with this for the last hour or so, and when I came back to post it, I saw Ray's post <grin>.

AK_3235.jpg


WB in LR, Import to PS, levels, selection, Radial blurs, selective sharpening, channel mixer, curves, 8-bit, sRGB profile, save as jpg.

Cheers,

Cem
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Ray West said:
I suppose its stating the obvious, but the wheel looks like a halo, as in church window stained glass, so maybe push it towards posterisation, turn it into a graphic rendition, a more extreme version of Dierk's.

Best wishes,

Ray

At last Ray,

The intent of the photographer travelled on an arc. What I caught in a split second (perhaps obvious now, required the correct position, the risk of not inserting myself into her world such that she was no longer as I hope) arrived!

This shows some of the emotion driven language we speak with pictures. These are containers for ideas, cultural affirmation, challenge through attention getting.

Obvious perhaps but fascinating too!

So, go ahead render you version as you suggested!

Cem,

I love your rendition. I suppose a Maddonna on Hollywood Blvd would show an open smile! I was tempted to morph the lips!

Asher
 

Ray West

New member
I've never dne this b4

Well, you asked for it,
As usual, a brilliant idea, executed poorly...

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Oh I cheated, I actually printed out the image on A4, to colour laser printer, having crudely painted out the background, messed with the colours, cropped it, then drew in the lead work with a felt tip marker pen, and scanned it in again. Applied a gradient layer, changed the background to a blueish colour, with 'colour replace' in cs2, then a layer for the halo effect, and applied 'the plastic wrap' effect, which makes it look like the old ripple glass, and seemed to contour the lead. Over sharpened it, tried some 'neon glow'. I haven't used cs2 for 4 months. Then saved it in jpeg, and the colours went so flat. Grabbed it into irfan view to finally resize it, and boosted the contrast. I hope you appreciate the flaws in the glass.

Best wishes,

Ray
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Splendid, Ray!

That, BTW, is still photography, but now "mixed media" and easier to sell, LOL!

Asher
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Dierk Haasis said:
My original problem was not some stray hues but an ugly cast to the complete photo, which I could not cure in Lightzone - my first choice for what I did because I would have it easier with the face and the spokes. I took it into RSP and again had trouble to WB the thing, I either got an orange or a green picture with lots of blown highlights. Essentially the same with ACR in Photoshop CS2; Lightroom took care of it with one click onto either the street or her shirt.

Interesting that you found lightroom to be so unique. I'm hearing so much praise for LR.

Surprised that lightzoen and RSP didn't help!

Thanks for your contributions. You have put in a great effort and I like your offering.

Asher
 

Mary Bull

New member
LA Street Madonna

Asher Kelman said:
I took this picture one late bustling hot California evening.

She's, as you see, on the side walk on Hollywood Blvd. Ca. She has straw things to sell. There's no title to set you on any track!

2006_07_Girl_3235.jpg


Uncorrected

Download the DNG image, process and crop as you wish according to the title you provide.
Asher, I have deliberately quoted your "uncorrected" image, for easy comparison with my treatment, below.

Having seen the Madonna theme being carried out by others here, and intrigued by the color cast which Dierk could not remove in LightZone--neither could I, of course--I decided to use the color cast to emphasize the traditional color for the Madonna, blue. That didn't work, so I went for the royal purple.

I'll put an account of the tool stack I used in LightZone below my version of the picture.

LA Street Madonna

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I have done this strictly as an exercise, for practice. But I like the outcome pretty well. I kept Asher's frame. I like that purple car and all the highlights that the difficult lighting brought to the photo.

Mary
 
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Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Interesting purple take! Never thought of that. If you want to do thatl, maybe a duotone would be a thing to look at.

BTW, has anyone noticed here reflection in the car?

Asher
 

Mary Bull

New member
Purple for the Mother of a King

Asher Kelman said:
Interesting purple take! Never thought of that. If you want to do thatl, maybe a duotone would be a thing to look at.
How would one go about making a duotone in LightZone?
BTW, has anyone noticed here reflection in the car?
I had not, but I do now, since you have mentioned it.

I was completely engrossed in the colors, and in the symbolism of purple for the Madonna. And the neon-look of the highlights was also fascinating me as I worked with the image.

Mary
 

Dierk Haasis

pro member
Ray West said:
I suppose its stating the obvious, but the wheel looks like a halo, as in church window stained glass, so maybe push it towards posterisation, turn it into a graphic rendition, a more extreme version of Dierk's.

Look at the file name of my [seems, too subtle] version ...
 

Eric Michelson

New member
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I cropped the image, proof previewed in BW but kept in RGB, changed the color tonalities some to give a smoother skin tone and changed curves to what I felt to be max printable contrast. Finally I burned in some to stand her off the roadway. Then converted to Grayscale.

I cropped because the hot reflections in the car pulled my eye from her very likeable face which is nicely framed by the wheel cover. In BW the light is very nice, almost has a studio feel to it.

She has the naive vulnerability of youth. The angle of the photographer and her proxmity to the road has me a little worried for her.

I like Ray's stained glass graphic. Very nice.
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Eric Michelson said:
20061107AR_2_MG_3235.jpg


I cropped the image, proof previewed in BW but kept in RGB, changed the color tonalities some to give a smoother skin tone and changed curves to what I felt to be max printable contrast. Finally I burned in some to stand her off the roadway. Then converted to Grayscale.

I cropped because the hot reflections in the car pulled my eye from her very likeable face which is nicely framed by the wheel cover. In BW the light is very nice, almost has a studio feel to it.

She has the naive vulnerability of youth. The angle of the photographer and her proxmity to the road has me a little worried for her.

I like Ray's stained glass graphic. Very nice.

Eric,

I do like your rendering very much. The effort in burning in to separate from the b.g. is effective. Your crop is pleasing and the black and white conversion is great. I like it very much. If you have a large file could you send it to me so I can see how it prints out?

Yes, Ray's mixed media work is so creative.

Now Don,

Do you know how difficult it is to go from .DNG files to .CRW?

Asher
 

Cem_Usakligil

Well-known member
Ray West said:
Well, you asked for it,
As usual, a brilliant idea, executed poorly...

img_13830_0_glass.jpg



Oh I cheated, I actually printed out the image on A4, to colour laser printer, having crudely painted out the background, messed with the colours, cropped it, then drew in the lead work with a felt tip marker pen, and scanned it in again. Applied a gradient layer, changed the background to a blueish colour, with 'colour replace' in cs2, then a layer for the halo effect, and applied 'the plastic wrap' effect, which makes it look like the old ripple glass, and seemed to contour the lead. Over sharpened it, tried some 'neon glow'. I haven't used cs2 for 4 months. Then saved it in jpeg, and the colours went so flat. Grabbed it into irfan view to finally resize it, and boosted the contrast. I hope you appreciate the flaws in the glass.

Best wishes,

Ray
Hi Ray,

IMNSHO, this is art by all means :). According to the Wiki definition of art:
Art is an act of creation, when images and objects, sights and sounds, or drawings and carvings convey the beauty and splendor of the world, or realize the imagination of the artist, for the purpose of self-expression or the shared enjoyment of its creation.....
Britannica Online defines it as "the use of skill and imagination in the creation of aesthetic objects, environments, or experiences that can be shared with others"...
So you have taken a snapshot and have elevated it to the status of art since you had a vision of creating beauty in a certain way and have used your skills and imagination in getting there, ie creating an aesthetic object. My compliments!

Cheers,

Cem
 

Ray West

New member
stating the obvious

Cem and all here,

Thanks for pointing out the wiki definition - can you please mention it over to the monkey art thread. I think with a little work, maybe, it will get a basis of something we can all agree with. That whole topic has been a real struggle with me, trying to get a common ground.

wrt your other comments, other than the train of thought, that I suspect was originally in Asher's mind - I wonder if I can make the wheel look like a hat, since I can't get the car to move, or the girl to move', and then maybe at that stage he thought of a halo, not hat, or maybe later, the thought that struck Dierk, you, me and others was forged then. If the wheel had been moved away by six inches, then It may have been something else we were trying to get.

Any way, while we're all still friends, here's my take.

I look at Brian's, I see, 'hey Brian, its a halo, come on, it 's what it's meant to be.' So, he removes it. He pushes the girls face up into the corner, way past the 1/3 corner, then he blurs most of it, contrasts the skin tone and the blue either side of the diagonal, and although he forces you into a corner, to look at her eyes, the small in focus area is somehow balanced by the larger blurred area. I think that is clever, and skilful in concept, and execution, really Lowe in my esteem ;-).

Dierk tries to get an accurate rendition, knows in his mind its 'a madonna', as he pointed out he named the file that. He has made an 'acceptable' image, which could be construed as not a compliment, when in fact it is the opposite. He recovered some colour information, and made it pleasing to view, yet still a very accurate representation of the scene, but with some colour adjustment - I don't know whether to refer to it as a glow, or pop, but is different than Ashers original image, has more 'life' it is the original, but a 'subtle' hint to Dierk's thoughts, but not so subtle, 'cos it triggered me into thinking it could be stained glass halo. I think Cem saw the same and took it further than Dierk, see what its like in b&W, got it to glow, real sunshine, which is what I wanted to do.

While he was doing that Asher challenged me to do what I thought may work. So I roughly did that. I do know a little bit about leaded stained glass windows, but would have liked to have been able to look more closely at some. Anyway, the result showed the concept, but nowhere near as good a result if Dierk or anyone else could have done, by stating the obvious. I messed up completely with the bit I wanted to get right, the halo, but it serves to give the idea.

Having 'done the obvious' it then restricts whatever comes afterwards, and I wish maybe for something else. Still, Mary does purple. Eric does the definitive black and white version. He explains exactly how he got there, and it was worth getting there, since it shows yet another way of subject focus.

Now, is there anyway that anyone can put this all together. A real cooperative multinational photograpghic production, a picture produced by combining half a dozen or so thoughts. It needs to be an expert in photoshop or post processing, so that lets me out. In fact, if we can manage 12 by 2007, and Nikolai gets humoured by us, we may be able to make some calendars.....

Come on, you know you can do it...

Best wishes,

Ray
 

Cem_Usakligil

Well-known member
Great analysis and post Ray. I like the idea of creating a calendar challenge very much, it certainly deserves further consideration (maybe we should give Nik a shout to help us out).

In all fairness to Asher, I am not sure whether this particular image is suitable for such a purpose.
Nevertheless, I'll be happy to join the fun in any case :).

Thanks for wrapping things up.

Cheers,

Cem
 
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