Move that body

[Frank Doorhof]

Model : Carlies
Shot during today's workshop which was the first one for Carlies with me (there will be more I think )


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MvrGr,
Frank

 

[Bart_van_der_Wolf]

Model : Carlies
Shot during today's workshop which was the first one for Carlies with me (there will be more I think )

Hoi Frank,

Beautiful model, I hope there will be more!

There's not enough shadow definition for my taste in the first 2 and, although it's a nice color accent in a complementary color, the bra strap draws too much attention (mine anyway). The model looks a bit timid/uncertain which doesn't match the windy setting, and low camera angle.

Number 3 is my favorite, very powerful and provocative, and perfectly posed and timed. You even captured the motion in her left hand (to add to the insulting gesture). The composition forces the viewer's eye to go round and round, very captivating. Exposure seems to be spot-on, shadows and highlights, it's all there. Nothing distracts, everything adds to her 'anger'.

Number 4 is different, but I don't like the almost fist like hands and the rest of her pose. The stare is powerful and the model looks beautiful, but the rest is lacking, IMHO of course.

Keep'em coming ...

Bart

 

[Johan Combrink]

I love these Frank.

Something i have learnt over time is that no matter which "guidelines" one tends to break, if your final result has a quality finish, the images always look good. What works for me with your work, is the clarity in a shot and the contrast so to speak, and therefore the other nits one gets on comments really seems to not mean as much. Well to me in anycase.

I still need to get that clean clear look in my work....I think it is just some silly things I need to learn to get there, and I will with more practise.

thanks for sharing....always enjoyable viewing.