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Orchid- Dropping off into the Dying

Charlotte Thompson

Well-known member
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Dropping off into the Dying
Charlotte Thompson​
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Charlotte,

This picture I like and find the black space generous enough for me to get into to receive the falling flower.

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Dropping off into the Dying
Charlotte Thompson​


Orchids don't cry

but they don't die silently

Like a feather,

before the fall, a wispy creak

almost a sigh,

as the flower says goodbye

Here's my hand,

We'll both fly down together!


Asher
 

Charlotte Thompson

Well-known member
Asher

You have seen and felt my intentions exactly! I thought the black space added to the drama of the falling and dying orchid petal. Metaphorically speaking- Your poem works brilliantly with the photo. Thank you.

Charlotte
 

Charlotte Thompson

Well-known member
Mike
Well thank you ever so much! I have a friend who can flowers like nobody's business He used to post here. William Blackford. I can't hold a candle to his flower work- But I try from time to time-
I so appreciate your kind comments-

Charlotte-
 

fahim mohammed

Well-known member
Charlotte, this is such a lovely image that I keep coming back to it. And Asher's words and thoughts sent me off into another direction...

' Alas, that Spring should vanish with the Rose!

That Youth's sweet-scented Manuscript should close!

The Nightingale that in the Branches sang,

Ah, whence, and whither flown again, who knows! '

Lovely image indeed.

Kindest regards


Charlotte,

This picture I like and find the black space generous enough for me to get into to receive the falling flower.

DSC_0297.jpg


Dropping off into the Dying
Charlotte Thompson​


Orchids don't cry

but they don't die silently

Like a feather,

before the fall, a wispy creak

almost a sigh,

as the flower says goodbye

Here's my hand,

We'll both fly down together!


Asher
 

Charlotte Thompson

Well-known member
Fahim

Thank you for that beautiful poem! It is so very touching to know that my photo inspires other art.
I think art is a muse for one another- in humanity we should bother to feel something more than the need for money,power etc....

Charlotte-
 
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