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Pandamonium

John Angulat

pro member
A quick-grab shot passing through NYC's Times Square.
I thought the advertising message on the building played well against the crowd on the street.


pandamonium.jpg

Life in New York...from my wanderings
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
A quick-grab shot passing through NYC's Times Square.
I thought the advertising message on the building played well against the crowd on the street.


pandamonium.jpg

Life in New York...from my wanderings

The anonymous wave of people each in their own sphere of purpose and or delusion spills across the intersection under the banner of "Pandemonium" is an apt combination. I'd consider an S curve to boost the contrast and make things pop a little more.

Thanks for sharing this special image!

Asher
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Hi Asher,
Thanks and I'll give that a try.
I fear the worst as the original was a pretty crappy exposure.

John,

To go from a snap to a compelling picture is sometimes worth the extra devotion and can pay off in surprising ways.

Try assigning colors separately to B&W and thus you can bring out individual elements and build the image from what you have. You might, for example, convert the sign with one set of setting, (perhaps using two layers, hue/sat and then channels set to mono) to individualize just that part. Do this for each component and paint black in a layer mask for everything else. This way only that feature is expressed with that unique setting. Working through all the features you consider important, you can rank features using:

  • allocation of color to gray scale

  • contrast via an S-curve

  • degree of sharpening

  • extent of blur


What I do is to print out on plain laser paper B&W drafts and mark up features with a red wax marker working quickly and then using different sheets for different ideas. You might use, instead, a black soft pencil to accentuate or blur a particular element. If you have a lot of sheets, you can go through many alternate ideas very fast. You might even cut the paper and use an idea from one with another, combining your moments of inspiration. This exercise frees one of the disciplined approach in editing through photoshop as everything done fast and with the mind making total concepts that PS slows down.

I know I write a lot that one might say more succinctly as "think outside the box" but I also wanted to share my approach in case it's of some value to you here.

Pictures like this with an immediate energy are worth working on. The effort might or might not bring this particular photograph to a new level that satisfies you more. Still, it will give you tools that will help in the next picture you build from your snaps!

Asher
 

John Angulat

pro member
Asher,
I think I speak for others as well when I say thank you for the time and effort you put into your comments, critiques and suggestions.
Yes, it may have been easier to simply say "it needs work, the exposure is off, etc.", but you didn't. You took the time to explain.
More importantly, you've taught me an approach to this "crappy exposure" I would not have considered (heck, I'll be honest...didn't even know about).
Thank you very much.
 

fahim mohammed

Well-known member
John, I was looking at the photo and wondering...what could each of the visible person be thinking of?
each of them might be thinking of something that is of concern or joy to them; but how many would be
having similar thoughts?

what to cook, how to pay the mortgage, meeting the teacher or not having prepared a report for the boss?

maybe what movie to see or seeing the in-laws :(

Capturing an instant of time..

Best
 

John Angulat

pro member
Hi Fahim,
So true, your observation.
With any given crowd, the mental possibilities are endless.
How often have you or I walked about, seeming lost in thought?
Now raise those numbers of thoughts to an exponential level...
Might make for an interesting series - capturing crowds "lost in thought".
Hmmmm.....
 
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