A gem of an idea!
Sometimes there's a gem of an idea, behind a snap. However, if things worked that easily, art would not be precious as everyone could do it by clicking the shutter. Thanks William for allowing me to experiment with your concept and shot. Here's a totally different way of looking at the image. It's not mean to be better than yours but rather you open up your imagination to the myriad of ways you might see your concept develop.
William Blackford: Touching Edits by ADK with permission
I'm intrigued by what you appear to be going after. This is to jog you to work more, going back on that trek to look at things anew, take more pictures and rework them to express your ideas here. I believe that materializing one's imagination is an iterative process of work. However, it takes a lot of effort for most of us to get something that has not only the idea, but is imbued with some essence of a self-sustaining power too. I say this, not as some guru but rather as another traveler on the same pilgrimage.
Asher