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Far Side of a Modern Town

Jarmo Juntunen

Well-known member
You probably have never heard of Jyväskylä, a town in Central Finland. Not unless you're a huge motor sports fan or a friend of modern architecture. Well, I'm neither. That's why I felt my hometown deserves to have its' other side shown, as well. The side that is not brochure pretty (but still far from ugly):



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Rgds, Jarmo
 
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Jarmo Juntunen

Well-known member
28 views and 0 comments. So nice to have fans! Be that as it may, here's a few more:

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#2 A Gate With No Fence

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#3 A Nature Trail (Temporarily Closed)

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#4 A Closed-down Paper Mill (as seen from the closed nature trail)

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Jarmo
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
You probably have never heard of Jyväskylä, a town in Central Finland. Not unless you're a huge motor sports fan or a friend of modern architecture. Well, I'm neither. That's why I felt my hometown deserves to have its' other side shown, as well. The side that is not brochure pretty (but still far from ugly):Rgds, Jarmo

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Jarmo,

This is a remarkable picture for the impression of a tiny door on lower left. Play with that as an idea. consider making the verticals, vertical in PS Edit, transform.

Pity the framing cuts through windows. My idea is always to shoot unfamiliar scenes extra wide and even get coverage for potential stitching all around.

"Frame tight and crop closer" is an overworked aphorism in photography and only really applies to someone who really knows the tiny universe of a photographic specialty. So wedding photographers do that every time. For lesser mortals, have coverage!

The close framing here chop through windows. Clouds, windows and hands should have a reason for being amputated. Otherwise, it's likely better to include or exclude entirely.

Do you have more? It would be nice to have enough to be able to present this orthogonally unless there's some reason you have for doing otherwise.

Asher
 

Cem_Usakligil

Well-known member
Hi Jarmo,

FWIW, I have enjoyed looking at these pictures. It is a window to a part of the world which we shall probably never visit in person. The images belong together as a set and I did not want to C&C them individually. I apologize for not reacting before, albeit a short notice like this one.

Thanks for sharing :)

Cheers,
 

Jarmo Juntunen

Well-known member
Jarmo,

This is a remarkable picture for the impression of a tiny door on lower left. Play with that as an idea. consider making the verticals, vertical in PS Edit, transform.

Pity the framing cuts through windows. My idea is always to shoot unfamiliar scenes extra wide and even get coverage for potential stitching all around.

"Frame tight and crop closer" is an overworked aphorism in photography and only really applies to someone who really knows the tiny universe of a photographic specialty. So wedding photographers do that every time. For lesser mortals, have coverage!

The close framing here chop through windows. Clouds, windows and hands should have a reason for being amputated. Otherwise, it's likely better to include or exclude entirely.

Do you have more? It would be nice to have enough to be able to present this orthogonally unless there's some reason you have for doing otherwise.

Asher

Hi Asher! Thank you for your excellent advice! The reason I did such a tight crop is very simple. I need a decent wide angle! I'll try posting the wider original for comparison.

Cheers Cem! Wonderful feedback, as usual.

Jarmo
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Hi Asher! Thank you for your excellent advice! The reason I did such a tight crop is very simple. I need a decent wide angle! I'll try posting the wider original for comparison.

Cheers Cem! Wonderful feedback, as usual.

Jarmo

With today's stitching in OPhotoshop and so many other programs being so easy, consider capturing adjacent real estate by swing your camera around the entrance pupil to a 50 mm lens. You will be amazed at what you can achieve!

Asher
 

Jarmo Juntunen

Well-known member
With today's stitching in OPhotoshop and so many other programs being so easy, consider capturing adjacent real estate by swing your camera around the entrance pupil to a 50 mm lens. You will be amazed at what you can achieve!

Asher

Asher, did some trials on Microsoft Image Composite Editor (well, it's free!) and must say I was quite impressed. Really need to look into this.

Another thing regarding your comment on my picture and things getting cut. Do you think that there might be some cases when this kind of effect could be used to add some rhytm to the picture? Especially when the subject depicts a recurring pattern, such as windows and doors in a building front? Do note: I'm not referring to my picture in this thread, please regard this as a general compositional question.
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Another Rant on "Rules in Art" and the Artist's Duty to his/ her Work.

Asher, did some trials on Microsoft Image Composite Editor (well, it's free!) and must say I was quite impressed. Really need to look into this.

Another thing regarding your comment on my picture and things getting cut. Do you think that there might be some cases when this kind of effect could be used to add some rhytm to the picture? Especially when the subject depicts a recurring pattern, such as windows and doors in a building front? Do note: I'm not referring to my picture in this thread, please regard this as a general compositional question.

Jarmo,

We make comments and give reactions based on our own sense of esthetics and likely resonance with others who visit galleries. It is therefore constrained by our various upbringing, travels and education.

For my opinions, don't view them as what you should do, rather what one might also consider. Even if I was a professor of Art and at major college, (and I am no way qualified for that), I'd expect some advantage in going against any rules we might claim to be important.

Why?

Art must be subservient to the aims and mind of the artist. Poles behind a portrait can indeed go through the head, to the consternation of critics. One might choose to crop a portrait right though the eyes. These could be your decisions and clinch the composition. I'd hope they were well thought out and needed to express your ideas. As viewers, we can only see what you show us and vote with our interest, feet and/or pocket books, but that does nor mean any of us are "right". Here, you must take with a huge "pinch of salt" whatever critique you receive. Register the feedback, but then refer to your own "controlling ideas". Debate this, but protect the sanctity of your own original intent.

If any of our ideas happen to fit with your own and if there's some utility for you, then go ahead, apply them judiciously to your work. The idea is to externalize what's in your minds eye. Of course, if what's in your mind is hardly formed or thought out, there may be a lot of room for further work.

My guess is that's where we are. If however you have in your mind a motif of disorder that requires half of a hand or cloud, then you must follow that and see, if, in the end, after you have exploited all that you know, the final image gives you the experience you imagine would be evoked. If it does, then your art is worthy. My opinion is then irrelevant as far as your art is concerned, as it has been born. I just have to catch up or walk by.

Asher
 
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Jarmo Juntunen

Well-known member
Asher, thank for your reply and opinion. This is what seek most in a forum like this. A free discussion! No, I will not change the way I'm thinking based on what you or other people here might say. Yes, I have my own ideas that I wish to express. No, I do not always get there. But then again: who does?
 

fahim mohammed

Well-known member
Jarmo, I like #2 in the first set. I always fall for geometrical shapes and patters. The color scheme also adds to the dynamics of this photo. The colors seem faded. I would add a bit of contrast and/or saturation to make it pop a little more.

The nature trail ( closed ) capture to me seems to have excellent potential. The brown tones could do
with a decrease in exposure a notch.

These are just my views.

Thanks for sharing a part of the world that indeed few of us might get a chance to visit. I am not a
motor-car racing fan, so my ignorance is that much more of your country.

Regards.
 
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