[gorio] - wipeout mono

[karlo reyes]

“Spontaneity is the quality of being able to do something just because you feel like it at the moment, of trusting your instincts, of taking yourself by surprise and snatching from the clutches of your well-organized routine, a bit of unscheduled plea”

ISO 50 l 24mm l f11 l .7" l ND8 l .9 NDGRAD SE l 5DMK2 l 17-40L

 

[Asher Kelman]

“Spontaneity is the quality of being able to do something just because you feel like it at the moment, of trusting your instincts, of taking yourself by surprise and snatching from the clutches of your well-organized routine, a bit of unscheduled plea”

ISO 50 l 24mm l f11 l .7" l ND8 l .9 NDGRAD SE l 5DMK2 l 17-40L

Karlo,

I hate to say someone's picture is wonderful, but I do like the life in this photograph. What a good clean job. The water races diagonally with the crests of waves crashing down successively in a moving glimpse of your experience. Still, it's not anywhere near as good as you might make it because the sky underwhelms us. I would have like to have seen more and better drawn sky. It's just getting interesting but then it's cut off! Going higher would also mean going grabbing more of the sea too. If you can tolerate the little black rocks being smaller, use of a wider angle lens might be worth considering here. Also the sky needs more devotion to showing its rolling clouds. They can easily be counterbalancing, or mirroring the movement of the water.

Asher

 

[karlo reyes]

Karlo,

I hate to say someone's picture is wonderful, but I do like the life in this photograph. What a good clean job. The water races diagonally with the crests of waves crashing down successively in a moving glimpse of your experience. Still, it's not anywhere near as good as you might make it because the sky underwhelms us. I would have like to have seen more and better drawn sky. It's just getting interesting but then it's cut off! Going higher would also mean going grabbing more of the sea too. If you can tolerate the little black rocks being smaller, use of a wider angle lens might be worth considering here. Also the sky needs more devotion to showing its rolling clouds. They can easily be counterbalancing, or mirroring the movement of the water.

Asher

thanks asher for taking time to comment. if i remember it right i opted for 24mm here coz the waves are really crashing here and getting closer to the driftwood on the right side is going to be risky.. as for the sky the clouds are just not there.. i just hope i can go back again there.. cheers!