Charlotte,
I like this as its all together as a believable unit. I see it as a growth stage. Could you try to keep this essence and stay on this track? No more complicated/colored than this is. Keep the throttle of the various imagination engines and fiddle hands set no more than used here until you have made say 20 such pictures in coherent collection.
Also, stop and think. Print this picture large and then write about it. Just strong single words. Then on another day, write concisely what this might mean to you or if you think it is trite and a doodle and not important.
By doing his, you are interviewing yourself and making an investment in your own artistic capability with this medium. If this is not important to you, then it doesn't belong in here, but in Layback Café as humor. Then we'll move it there. If it is indeed important to you, then you will do the work. This forum is for work in doing or making Photographic Art.
Thanks for sharing this new work!
Asher
It's so important to get one identity per series.