The 1st is the best version. The 2nd looks like you wanted a shot of the 2 and it didn't work, so you cropped it to fill the frame with them. The first one looks like it is more intentional. That being said... If it were mine I would crop about 1/8 off the left. 1/2 between the left edge and the drop off cliff thing in the background. I like all the 'wrong' things... focus is off, I like that they are look off the short side of the picture.. makes me want me to peek beyond the right edge. Maybe looking at the sun set? The sky needs to be there.