Hi Nikolai,
I did not say that it was OK for kids in Africa... etc.., I am sorry if you thought I said that. I tried to explain where I thought the reasons for my differnt feelings about the different situations arose. I am not trying to score any sort of points in this whatsoever, but you said you were 'having some portrait fun', so I thought you were not posting for assessment of anything much. I gave my views on the content/style of the photos, the reaction it got from me. You can take notice or not. You said it was a soft air pistol, you tried to make it look something different, more threatening than it really is, bearing in mind no child never lost their sight by playing with air guns.
I am saying, if you are seeking advice on how to take photos of people with guns, then maybe it would make sense if the person holding the gun knew how to use it. I think if they were trained in its use, they would not point it at anyone. Its the staring down the barrel thing.
Come to think of it, Many years ago I used to play 'cowboys and Indians'. Probably that is no longer allowed today....
Anyway, picture 1, I can see the folds? in the background a bit, and I find the dark glasses and shadow from the gun a distraction. But the glasses, well that's the style of them, so Ok, I can't see her eyes. Her arms, being in shadow, look like arms in shadow, I guess..
Picture 2 strong light, high contrast, very difficult. I have a black and white dog - very difficult to get a decent photo. The black gun and pale fingers, the same. I guess you could have dimmed the lights a bit.
Picture 3 the gun spoils her face, the ppd eyes do not help.
The 4th one, is interesting. Maybe do a bit of freehand drawing, some detail in the gun, her face and hair, I don't know, but well worth playing with in pp.
wrt the gallery, I like the 'armed and dangerous' pose, although there is a bit too much eye white on my monitor, at that small size.
I not sure how it works in your part of USA (I'm in UK) but if you have clay pidgeon shooting grounds, maybe you call it 'skeet', a different discipline over here, take her for some professional coaching, pracrtice shoot, however its run. Then you will get some really great photos, and she will get some real fun.
Best wishes,
Ray
take care substituted less searchable terms about our young people.