I don't have a website but I sure do visit a lot of them so I know what works and what does not work for me. I may notice certain things that other people may not. Or, I may be bothered more by certain things than other people. Whatever the case, one thing that really stands out to me, whether it is on a website, in a magazine article, or perhaps in someone's resume that I might be looking over, are things like misspelled words, incomplete sentences, grammatical errors, and so forth. In everyday things like forum postings, who really cares? However, if like I said, I am looking to hire someone for a job, and the first thing that stands out to me is a misspelled word, a completely missing word, or some obviously incorrect sentence structure, that really makes me wonder whether I am in the right place or not. I always feel that if they are that careless in what they are putting out as their own advertisement vehicle, what are they going to do if working for me and being paid by me? 99% of the time that is where my involvement stops and I will go no further. Something as important and upfront as a commercial website, where most people will gather their very first impressions of you and your business, should always be free from these kinds of basic mistakes. Someone should be proofing all of the text and making sure it is correctly written before it is released on the public. That of course is only my opinion and I have been known to be quite anal in such matters so take it for what it's worth, if anything.
One other thing, and remember I have no website and don't know anything other than how to get to them, but when I look at your portfolio, all of the images have a pixalated look to them and are not very clear at all. I see square looking artifacts in all of them and that is off-putting as well.
James Newman