School kids on a field trip in Poland

[Kathy Rappaport]

On my Baltic Adventure, we spent a day in Gdansk. As we crossed over a footbridge, there were some very excited school children on a field trip.

Copyright 2008 - Kathy Rappaport

 

[doug anderson]

I like the way you have captured the world that kids share with each other (the look, in this case) without adults. I would like to see more of their faces, or a crop that isolates the little girl with the smile and the boy she's smiling at.

 

[doug anderson]

cropped version

Kathy: here's what I was talking about. Hope it's alright to crop.

Doug

 

[Kathy Rappaport]

Where is it?

Thanks, Doug...where is it?

 

[Asher Kelman]

Hi Kathy,

I like the idea of a crop. If I may suggest, to the left of the girl on the left and to the right of the guy with the pink hat and the bun! These two girls and the boy are the story!

Asher

 

[doug anderson]

Sorry, Here's the Crop

This crop shifts the focus to the moment shared between the two.