As for the technical side, and I hope you'll forgive me my classical photography training, the positioning of the fill light could have been better. The key light is the sun. When you then place the fill light on the opposite side of the subject, you'll create a kind of pincer lighting, the subject caught in between, especially risky with the relatively high level of fill. That resulted in her right nostril almost disappearing.
I've been taught to place the fill light either immediately above the lens, or slightly to the side of the main light. That will also reduce the risk of double shadows by the nose, even if you choose for a high level of fill with a smaller fill light size. It would also sculpt the face on the shadow side a bit more, due to the light angle on the skin surface as the surface normal goes from camera direction to 90 degrees. Less light will be reflected as the angle increases.
Cheers,
Bart