New Rose Bud
Tell me what you think?
Is it cropped too tightly?
I think it needs the rest of the foliage on the bottom and the right.
Tell me what you think? Is it cropped too tightly?
Yours is far better now, don't you think. Still look at mine again, there may be more yet to appreciate, if I have done it right, a sense of the dynamic energy of the bud, ready to burst out.Is this edit any better
Asher, I left the edges sharp cause I did this in a focus stacking program.
One could say that, but not necessarily. It all depends on the dynamics. You current presentation s even handed and flat and t seems to have a cyan hue.
Here's what I'd think you might consider:
Cody White: New Rose Bud
Edited to Reduce Cyan & distribute attention within the frame
If it is blurred too much for you then consider instead that the center is much sharper than your version. Also you might be less drastic in the cropping. One needs to relieve the uniformity of your original image, drastic as t might seem, but that's just one point of view and no more than that!Asher,
I didn't forget about commenting on your edit, just needed a little time to study it.
I like how you lightened it up, I do think the edges are blurred a little too far in, also the background looks a little too Grey.