Critique Requested Trying New Things

[Kevin Gagel]

I've been trying to make my photography more interesting. This multiple exposure was hand held while I took ten successive images for the camera to process as one. In On1 Photo Raw I added a just little colour boost to greens and reds. This image was my favourite for that day.

 

[Asher Kelman]

Kevin,

Superb that you are sharing. I am thrilled.

It’s so important that you do what your spirits ask of you! This catches my attention and I am now ready for its siblings!

 

[Asher Kelman]

As a small question, do you really need “photo by”, as it starts to distract, a tad form the delicate image. Your name has beautiful letters and could be sufficient.

Just an idea.

Asher

 

[fahim mohammed]

Very interesting image.
I agree with Asher re: the copyright!

 

[Kevin Gagel]

As a small question, do you really need “photo by”, as it starts to distract, a tad form the delicate image. Your name has beautiful letters and could be sufficient.

Just an idea.

Asher

Good point Asher. I think when I made it I was thinking I had to indicate I was the photographer but somehow stating I'm the photographer didn't seem right so I went with photo by. I'll think about this some and will probably just put my name as you suggest.

 

[Asher Kelman]

Kevin,

I hope we will see the next episodes of your experiments.

Asher

 

[Kevin Gagel]

F22, 1/8 sec., spot metered and 1/2 stop darker of exposure compensation I swept the camera upwards as the shutter opened. In On1 I added some colour enhancements and a texture. To me it evokes a kind of spooky forest. I also took the advise above and removed the redundant "Photo by".

 

[Asher Kelman]

Kevin,

Delighted to see another attempt to push boundaries, especially since you thought about how to control the light so well!

Kevin Gagel: “Forrest”
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Notice, Kevin, I added empty space above and below your work to allow it to show better!

Kudos!

Asher

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[Kevin Gagel]

Asher, I'll keep that in mind for the next image. Thanks.